Wednesday, 12 November 2008

Our Script for Thriller

For Park Scene:

Ricky: (To Charlie) What's gone wrong eh? We need to sort this out.
Charlie: I don't know, it's not my problem, I thought you were the one in charge of this.
Matt: Look, there's no use fighting, we just want the money.
Lil' Bob: Just let Rex sort this one out.
(Car pulls up, Rex arrives)
Rex: What the bleedin' hell have you done? (Rex uses violence) I'm going to make you all pay for this; you've blown the whole deal.
(Phone rings, Rex leaves)

Possible scene, phone call.

Kate: Where the hell are you Jimmy? You were meant to be gome hours ago, I thought you were at a business meeting.
Rex: Sorry babe, things look to have gone wrong.
Kate: Well, you'd better hurry up, I don't like waiting.
(Kate hangs up)

1 comment:

Roxxy said...

thanks for your comment :)
your script is good also! i like how its not specific on anything, so it creates mystery, which is thriller-y haha :) xxx